You Can't Trust Anyone

It's sad expecting to hurt, expecting your heart to break.

The feeling makes you feel numb.

It hurts your stomach and you can bearly breathe.

So thats why you just decide to let go.

No hope, no cause, just let go.

It doesn't matter anymore.

Just giving yourself up to the world.

Because the pain is worse than you can bare.

You can't go through it for a second time.

But what happens when  the right person comes.

And you having no feeling to share because you threw them all away.

You're heartless and unopen.

That person will just have to move on, just like you did...

Because in the end, you don't have friends.

You can't trust anyone!

Author's Note

Like or Dislike? Anything?

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Not bad. Usually I love it when things take a turn for the darker side of life but this poem doesn't really hit me. I don't particularly relate to this, although I may have thought that I would at some points in my life. I don't like that the word "emo" is the first thing that comes to my mind on reading this because I don't really care for emo poetry. To me it is pointless and repetitive. But it is a decent poem and the emotion is well displayed.

[Poetic Beauty]

This poem makes me greatly sad that someone could feel this way. I do love one person whom I'm not with but I am always open for friendships.

[Melinda]

So, true. I think this is very well written, not many free-verse poems are, but all the contrary. Really enjoyed it :)

[The Analog Kid]

Good job in free-verse. Great insight.

[Gandré]

This is powerful writing; for theoretically, we all are competitors (in jobs) and our linear view of the world makes us jealous, envy, we don't like that the new neighbor puts a wheel on our land, you are addressing the right issues of the modern world. I liked this a lot. This line made it for me, it was just a "flash!":

Just giving yourself up to the world.


We are giving ourselves to someone's supremacy and social ecoomical familiar (you name it..) hierarchy, and our ego-desire. Perhaps you like to read what I write

[SarahCortland]

great job GARY!

[c.m.]

Angry, sad, and true. Very true. Good write, I enjoyed it.

[Senseless whatever]

I like this one. Good rant type of write. A bit of anger mixed with some sadness here. Good job.

[Daniel Gardner]

This is good. I think a lot of people end up feeling this way, whether for good or for bad.

True feeling here. Good poem, great expressions.

[Mitch*Dandy]

Wow like this a lot! That's how I feel in reality. Can't trusting anyone