You Can't Trust Anyone

It's sad expecting to hurt, expecting your heart to break.

The feeling makes you feel numb.

It hurts your stomach and you can bearly breathe.

So thats why you just decide to let go.

No hope, no cause, just let go.

It doesn't matter anymore.

Just giving yourself up to the world.

Because the pain is worse than you can bare.

You can't go through it for a second time.

But what happens when  the right person comes.

And you having no feeling to share because you threw them all away.

You're heartless and unopen.

That person will just have to move on, just like you did...

Because in the end, you don't have friends.

You can't trust anyone!

Author's Note

Like or Dislike? Anything?

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Not bad. Usually I love it when things take a turn for the darker side of life but this poem doesn't really hit me. I don't particularly relate to this, although I may have thought that I would at some points in my life. I don't like that the word "emo" is the first thing that comes to my mind on reading this because I don't really care for emo poetry. To me it is pointless and repetitive. But it is a decent poem and the emotion is well displayed.

[Thomas Fleet]

I agree with the title of this poem more than anything...
No truer words have been spoken.
Great message and well written.
Thanks for sharing.

[Tommy]

I can agree with the message of this piece. Being that if we are too lost in the past we will miss out on our future.

Nice right!
RLG,
Tommy

[WeekendWriter]

On the dark side...... Not my usual read. The second line feels a little awkward, but not bad overall.

Keep writing!! =)

[Steph]

feels like the story of my life right now. but that's why i like it. it's relatable

[DiMar4u]

i've diced up the contents of trust.
now it has become a question:
what can i trust you with?

most of us can be trusted with something.

but of my thoughts and my heart?
i am more giving to you,
and all of the rest of you,
whom i have not met
save through what we share
here....

i trust you,
because you have nothing to lose
in the encounter.

all others,
those who reside beside me,
i question and i observe,
and i maintain the front--

[Girlpuppy]

Pretty good. A little dark, but good.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is true. I liked it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Ali_Avery~7]

love it. It is a great, honest expression of pain :} truly enjoyed

-QG

[deeps]

This is so true! I totally agree with you on this.