a stormy day

A poem about heartbreak and betrayal.

It was a stormy day 

nothing going in my way

the night we met

lighting your cigarette

you said I looked beautiful

that I was all you ever needed

in you I trusted

but got my heartbroken

should have known better

before running away that you were never home

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I think you have captured the mood well but the description might be given a little more detail to 'round it out' Pranitha.