Gifts

My first poem in a long time.

An eternity of love

 in one lifetime.

A heart full of care

to give to you.

An eternal flame

burning with my love.

My warm embrace

to shield you from the cold lonliness.

The words 'I love you'

to give you comfort.

All of these things are yours to keep.

 

If your wondering what I'm asking in return for, dear,

you'll be glad to know that my demands are small.

Say it's me that you adore, for now and ever more.

That's all.

Reviews

[Sam Freeland]

It is apparent that you understand the REAL meaning of love, making the gift to those
who can receive this special act and emotion the kind of person who can return the love.
The better poets have been able to do this, and your connection to them will last you a lifetime.
An excellent beginning for anyone who knows how to care. We will be seeing many more wonderful
writings from you. Thank you for your review of my poem. sam