Luna's Magic

Something I wrote for my love.

The moon shines bright,
in ilustrious light.
We are together,never parting, forever.
We are in each others arms,
one captivated by the others charms.
Carefree bliss,
with just one kiss.
The time is right, on the hour of midnight.
Let us spread our wings,
and see what morning brings.

Author's Note

I hope you like it!!!

Reviews

[Ezekiel Silver]

This poem rocks! I like how use the moon to symbolize love when it usually symbolizes mystery. Great work!

[One Last Drop...]

Dude I like all your work. So I guess there isn't any point in me reviewing...oh well! LOL I'll do it anyway!

~Ashleigh

[Miss Mary Jane]

great flow. I dig it.

[Gavin Keary]

Thanx you guys. Way to make a new guy feel welcome. I will be looking over your writings ASAP.

[Illegitimate Artist]

That was a super cute little piece! I love the way it all flowed together. Very nice ^__^

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Great write! Very romantic. I liked the structure. It has a good flow. I could feel the emotion through the words you chose. I liked the subtle rhyme. Very nice!

Absolutely wonderful!It has a dark tone,but it's beautifully expressed,rhythm is really good,great job

[EliJoLee]

very romanitic.
very moving.
love the description for i got a very vivid image in my head.
swell writing!
keep it up!