Words Out Of Love

WORDS OUT OF LOVE

 

Not today but some other day,

I’ll touch your soul with my words,

When I’m a bundle of nerves,

I’ll look into your eyes and make-believe,

That my poem is good,

It’ll give us some relief,

Let go of yourself,

Into the embrace of the beautiful,

When the words pull you up,

The skies will dazzle,

And the stars will breathe upon you,

Like you are their lover,

With an insight for bliss,

You can run faster than you think,

And will win this world in just a single blink... 

Reviews

[Ars Goetia Poetry]

A truly fantastic piece of poetry, I am impressed. Thanks for sharing.

[Gaurav Walia]

Thank you so much Ars XD

[Ars Goetia Poetry]

The pleasure was all mine :)

[Akshita]

sum lines are damn awesome one....
i like d way u executed dis...gud 1

[Gaurav Walia]

Thank you, Akshita.

[Cassie]

awwwwww....I like the ending...mhhh..nicely crafted

[Gaurav Walia]

Thank You, Cassie.

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

"when iam bundle of nerves..." when i read this line i felt as if a promise is made cross the heart...
i like reading it...Good work Gaurav...

[Gaurav Walia]

Thanks Mate.

[AYVID N]

We all wish for a haven of bliss...Someday...Some other day...Very beautifully penned!

[Gaurav Walia]

Thank You, Divya.

[topsyturvy]

Just one thing. The line "Let go off yourself" Did you mean "Let go of yourself"?

That out of the way, I think this piece was damn beautiful, enough to make me say damn :) I loved your play of words!

[Gaurav Walia]

Oops! My bad...
Thanks for liking it though... XD

[Baby Ricochet]

Kind of Magical with some good imagery. Good Job

[Gaurav Walia]

Thank you, BR...

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is so well written and the words so heartfelt.Well penned my friend.

[Gaurav Walia]

Thank you Vidya...

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome.

[Avinash]

Promise of love..but whether the intended receiver will be able to value it..is the suspense. Even if it does not it is still a beautiful poem :)

[Gaurav Walia]

Thanks Avinash... i'm glad you liked my way of promising... :P

[Bowers]

great write, interesting thoughts you've place on this page.. please, though, dont make believe your poem is good! (you are talented for sure!) believe in yourself!

[Gaurav Walia]

Thanks a mill, Bowers... you're very kind.

[Bowers]

your welcome! :D