Entangled

She cheated on me every day and night So i had to let her go but without her my life is lifeless and my soul is fluttering with sorrow and pain.I wonder why she does'nt care anymore,I am still th same

ENTANGLED

 

As the clock ticks down to four,

I fix up my eyes on your burning soul,

You say my name with eyes of betrayal,

I swear I don’t understand if you really care…

 

Got down on my knees for your prayer,

While you text and chat with that slayer…

 

He murdered my love,

He murdered my soul,

I don’t regret it as that is for sure…

 

Let’s forget it,

I’ll let you now go,

I’ll pray you a life,

A life with my foe…

 

With him you can..keep up your pace,

As I fight and struggle..with my solace…

 

I swear I don’t understand,

With my shoulders wrangled,

I just can’t stand…

 

 

You said I can do better,

Then why am I here with my situation entangled,

Why am I here with my situation entangled…

Author's Note

RHYMING MIGHT NOT BE THAT GOOD...

Reviews

[Virtuosa X]

Can totally relate to this feeling of betrayal and cold, mixed emotions.

Well done!

[Gaurav Walia]

I know..right
Thanks hon... :D

[Virtuosa X]

My pleasure :)

[smilempsn]

Well Topic name reminded me of the movie Entangled....
But when I came and read...wOOw... this is another level of entangle-ness..

If it actually happened, that I am sorry for ur situation..!! :| :)

[Gaurav Walia]

It happnd a long time ago but i got over it...i cnt b waiting and praying for th whole of my life...u take lessons nd move on.. :)

[smilempsn]

:) gud to hear about that :)

[Gaurav Walia]

:D

[smilempsn]

^-^

[Adri Moolman]

Its really good... sorry it happened. but hey got a great poem out of it

[Gaurav Walia]

Yeah some benefit...
Thank u so much...

[Brownie]

a blessing in disguise fr u............ entagledness maks life simple eventually....
n nice rhyming of course...

[Gaurav Walia]

Thanks a ton... :D