Bag of Shame

My shameful rather embarrassing acts although unintentional cripple me as for now i carry this bag of shame...

BAG OF SHAME

I did it once,

I did it twice,

When she asked me again,

I did it thrice…

 

I carry this weight,

Weight of pain,

I don’t know why,

But I take this blame…

 

As I carry a bag,

A bag of shame,

A bag of shame…

 

I am only human,

I made my mistakes,

Being just a man,

I got this stain…

 

I walk alone,

I walk lame…

As I walk with the bag of shame,

With the bag of shame,

The bag of shame…

 

God knows why,

Now I feel  so dry,

Beneath the sky,

I still can’t lie...

 

About the bag of shame,

The bag of shame,

The bag of shame…

 

It is not what you think,

As I set this brink,

And you crossed it,

U will also carry,

A bag of shame,

A bag of shame,

A bag of shame…

Written By-

Gaurav Walia

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Reviews

[smilempsn]

That was amazing Gaurav.. Very nicely written :)
Definately going to be shelved in my Library :)

[Gaurav Walia]

I feel humbled....thank u so much :)

[smilempsn]

pleasure was all mine :)

[Gaurav Walia]

:D

[smilempsn]

^_^

[Anusha Prabhu]

This seemed like a song. Reminded me of Maroon 5's hall of fame.... Uve got some real talent in you bro..!! I just enjoy every second of your poetry...Hoping to get some more kavitas and worthwhile poems..:)

[Gaurav Walia]

I am really glad that you like my poems and for everyone who likes my writing style i will keep uploading more and more..As for kavitas i have not written any more yet but i am definitely going to pick up my pen again for it...Thank You very very much...God Bless :D

[Brandon S. Whitten]

The bag never matches the shoes. Good read and write.

[Gaurav Walia]

True...haha.. Thank u ,Sir...

[Sami Khalil]

A good write...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Gaurav Walia]

Thank u so much...

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Prritiy]

liked reading your feelings nicely conveyed in this creation.

[Gaurav Walia]

thank u so much...i appreciate it :)

[Prritiy]

:)

[zainul]

Lovely confession.
Enjoyed reading.

[Gaurav Walia]

Thank you Sir...

[zainul]

You are welcome :)

[Virtuosa X]

This is good.
The repetitions actually gave it its meaning and effect.

Nice job!

[Gaurav Walia]

Thank u so much dear.. :)

[Virtuosa X]

You're welcome anytime fellow poet :)

[Gaurav Walia]

:D

[Talal Hussain]

Great stuff loved it :-)

[Gaurav Walia]

Thanks man..God bless :)

[Just Kim]

I totally love this write & the solid format,
Deep with meaning!
Awesome!

[Gaurav Walia]

I am really glad that you like my writing... Gracias amiga ;)