Mistakes that haunt me

Time to work for good and be a better person.Time to rectify the wrong doings from my past...

MISTAKES THAT HAUNT ME

 

In the dusky silent meadows, I stood with my head in my hands in mentation of the devastation I had caused to the ones I promised the world one day. Time slips like sand from my bare filthy palms. Life has blocked my path with a wall- brobdingnagian …

My mistakes are now starting to haunt me all day and every night inducing insomnia in me. Wish I had an acquaintance with a scientist working on time travel so that he could send me back to the point when it all started where this time I would swear to the reckoning of new beginnings with my mistakes all absorbed or captured in some different dimension…

This promise will be kept to respect the chance if I get to make things right just the way they are supposed to be. Recite those melodious poetries for the people I care about and making the sky shine on their beautiful souls. My lips will ceaselessly be praying to the almighty to bless them with wisdom and success that they strive for…

O’ Lord! What just happened, I cannot believe. GOD just spoke to me. He told this naïve child something about his home so I shall now recall his mighty words because if today I don’t then we might never understand the science of “Karmic Justice” which is True for a fact but for those who do not realize their mistakes. Now in the words of the deity-

‘Thy world is full of miracles and ye are equipollent magicians of thy own lives with the power of magic wands in thy hands’. I believe, our father told us a fact that no one can deny…

Now I must wake up this lethargic body with a refined soul then dedicate my further existence to clean out the things I occurred in my past, the deeds I regret now and then…

Fire will be fought with fire. My intentions will get the best out of me, offering my hands to the ones drowning in darkness and in need. That is what I am going to do to make myself as well as the Lord proud and because now I am fully aware of the salvation that lies in the pristine path I have chosen which shall lead me to apricity. My reinvigorated essence will help me bring down the wall that stood tall long enough but with this new energy along with will it won’t be tough; it won’t be hard because this might be my only chance to be pardoned for my wrongdoings of my haunting past…

Author's Note

I have tried a little bit of biblical style. Please accept my apologies in advance if anyone finds it offensive...

Reviews

[The dark story]

This is really inspiring and have a very forcefull good message in it. I love the strength of the words which you have used here. It is very ravishing and thought provoking. I hope the others will get your message . The optimism shines through it . Awakening a new bright life into the darkness of desparation is a bit hard but a sorely correct deed-a deed of bravery!!
Loved it!! Awesome write. Pen on.

[Gaurav Walia]

Thank you so much ATIBA SHEIKH...

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The message could be, do things right the first time, so that if demons try to change your mind by promising they are going to rejuvinate you with a time machine you just push them to hell the first time and have no doubts about it.

[Gaurav Walia]

We can't be perfect.. can we?. We all make mistakes, oh yes! We all do, no matter how much good we try to be.. thr are mistakes that we occur: hurting someone we care about; telling lies; hitting someone and so many more. I don't say that our wrongdoings are all intentional or that we enjoy what we do, but maybe inevitable circumstances or the fear of consequences we take some bold steps even when we knw that it's probably not right. Sometimes we are just too naive. Therefore I believe that we can never run away from the fact that we make mistakes in our life, we are only humans. We should accept our bad deeds and find a way to correct them because we are the only one to be blamed for what we do...
Thank you for your review.. I appreciate it...

[SquinklaPsyOps]

What happens is that when old ladies spirits grow old, they get very sour and they become doors for evil spirits to reside in them, and the intentions of those evil spirits is to take them to hell. What we want to know is what causes that in them, because when old ladies lie, most persons do not question them and they become very dangerous, and we don't want persons to disregard evil spirits that reside in old ladies.

[Penny]

It is d first stage play i read here & i loved it. Very gud choice of words & d biblical style works. I cn relate 2 it 2 a very large extent. Thnx for sharing..

[Gaurav Walia]

I'm glad you liked my biblical style attempt... Thank you your review...:D

[Penny]

Its completely my pleasure.

[Gaurav Walia]

nah! some part of pleasure is mine too ;)

[Penny]

:-):-):-):-)

[Mary Christabel George]

Gaurav this is one of the beautiful things I have read ever.
Let us say if someone is suffering from depression & wants to start a all together new life? "Mistakes that haunt me" is the best to read.
"Mistakes that haunt me" not only speaks about the feeling of sorry for the mistakes but is very much optimist in its approach. It speaks about a new life with a change for good.
I felt as though my friend was speaking his heart out while reading this.
God bless....!

[Gaurav Walia]

Yes my dear Mary it does show you a path out of your depression.This piece is very close to my heart and I am really pleased to see that you my writer fellows like it.There are mistakes that we leave behind while some of them keeps on coming back grabbing you by the wrist holding you back but that must not stop you from where you are heading.You just stop for a while to introspect then you will realize that you are now strong enough to break those chains and move on...
Thank you so much to you and your mighty friend..God bless :D

[Mary Christabel George]

It is close to heart as well.
Whenever ill be low some day ill turn to this writing of yours.
Whatever you said is absolutely right.
And you are welcome always my friend.
:)

[Gaurav Walia]

:D

[Virtuosa X]

I think the emotion showing through this piece reflects most everyone's feelings of guilt, self-betrayal and failure. It shows how we struggle to get on after falling and walking past our mistakes.

Nicely done ;)

[Gaurav Walia]

Thank u so much hon.

[Virtuosa X]

You're welcome sweetie.

[zainul]

Yes,will force is a great treasure.
Hope you can overcome.
Well written piece.

[Gaurav Walia]

It is indeed a great treasure... thank u

[Gaurav Walia]

tabbycat you are right... We should believe in ourselves and carry on because even the sun shines on the one who stay on his chosen path...

[Just Kim]

Intentions just get us by when we need to. Intentions may be good,
sometimes not good enough. Forgiveness is always there.
If you ask for forgiveness of you sins. you are for given.
Sometimes it feels like we are not, but I think we are.

Evryone has those rocky roads. No road is perfect except for one
we all will be on one day. Just be who you are in this world,
Do what you think is right. I am sure God is with you with each step.