Angel from the Sunset

my heart melts for an angel 'til the dusk of day I seek.'

Angel of God that shines like melted gold
come closer to my warm flesh and repair
A heart that's turned cold
so bitter and so sour.
Dear Father I pray for an angel
at this very hour.


Allow us to comprehend one another
Whisper and dream together
sing a sing a long in harmony
love songs of peace and blessings,
Heart felt affection is what I crave
Thinking outside of the box, that enslaved
Me to many tearful days.
Send me light in a very dark place,


OH FATHER GOD, send me a mighty Angel,
To cure my mind of war
and allow my insecurities to cease

As I lay sleep
prepare a dagger for me
Dreams fade to night mares

Ask Freddie from Elm St,
who terrorized the helpless and forgotten.
Who promoted pedophilia and sodomy to
Millions of victims.

When asked what he done he said the
Government sent him. Please God we are,
Surrounded and defenseless without your
Beautiful angels to help us.

Author's Note

this was a piece of art that came to me freely and

Reviews

[J.J. Matthews]

I have to say that I quite like short and creative poetry, I can't help but notice most of your poems are rather biblical which is quite good. Having a theme definitely sets your place as a notable poet. This one in particular intrigued me as it had me thinking for quite a while. The sheer conciseness of this piece shows that you are one to leap on creativity as soon as it comes to you with no time to dabble with what may be a brilliant piece. The ending was rather comical as well, a snappy, one liner pun which had me laughing for a while. Overall this is a great blend of philosophy, artistry and comedy which is very admirable. The only recommendation I would make is structuring you poems a bit better, to be honest it seemed a bit jumbled and rather too rushed.