This Pen

This pen has a universe trapped within it

there are suns and moons, planets filled with life,

and barren rocks floating in space.

It wants to write to the music of the spheres,

but the author is a buffoon.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh i love this....love the concept....the personification of the pen that can't see eye to eye with the author...and the brevity makes this say so much in few words...our poetic circumstance can certainly be a flood, or barren rocks...one just as well as the other.

j.

[garrshaw]

yes it can, thanks Jacob

[Writergirl]

Good one! We all have those moments

[garrshaw]

Yes indeed we do. Thanks

[Viv Wade]

This poem really sums up how I feel about writing, too! There is so much I want to say via my keyboard, but I struggle to find the words. Well done, again!

[garrshaw]

Yes, I see that struggle. It's what makes you so good at it. I've had poems that I've worked on for months, even years and sometimes to correct such obvious mistakes I have to laugh. Thanks again Saty.