dreamgirl

When I awake my first thoughts are of you crowding my mind,

The night before was filled with romance, with flirtation and wine.

As we cuddled by the fireplace and stared into each others eyes,

a toast was made, that we would do this the rest of our lives.

As the fire burned and the logs crackled, the heat made us sweat,

moments like this in a relationship you will never forget.

I remember handing you a rose and telling you how beautiful you are,

That I didnt need light you would be by my side to be my guideing star.

I remember the smell of your perfume as we hugged as we kissed,

the taste of your lip gloss is what i will definetly miss.

As I awake your laughs echo from my dreams, it seems that imagined all of

this, maybe it was just a dream.

But how can true love feel so real and within my grasp,

I guess thats how love is, its never meant to last...

Reviews

[Mir]

The descriptiveness of this made it so easy for the reader to feel the emotions and what was happening in this poem. But you did it without being wordy which is something I think a lot of us have trouble with. Great job! :)