First/Last Day

romance

From the first day I laid eyes on you I knew you were the one for me

I fell in love with your eyes, your voice, your smile attracted me.

My love grew from the late phone calls and the laughing on the phone at night

From every kiss and every cuddle or chemistry felt so right.

Everyday with you feels like heaven, it has to be gods gift,

Because now that you are in my life, I feel that love is not a myth.

No one can ever say that I made a mistake in falling for you,

For true love is blind, that means I can only see when I am with you.

So from the first day to the last, you will always have my heart in your hands,

the world has face that you are my all, and til the last day i will forever be your biggest fan.

Reviews

[Mir]

This is so much better and is definitely finished! :) Great job! It all flowed so naturally! Whoever this girl is, she should feel very special!

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ah nicely expressed, enjoyed : )

[Mir]

This was good, but it seemed like it's not finished. What you had so far was great! But I think you should go back and try to add to it maybe! But either way, it's your writing and maybe I wasn't interperating it right! :)