I Love You

I wrote this for my second boyfriend and recent ex. I was deep in love but now that love is lost.

 

 

I

lose my breath every time I hear your voice.

L

oving and caring, you was my choice.

O

nly you can make me shiver under the hot sun.

V

ery tender and romantic, you are second to none.

E

very time I see you my heart begins to race.

Y

ou are the only one who can put a real smile on my face.

O

utside and in you are beautiful and kind.

U

nconditional love from you is the best a woman can find.

Reviews

[Dani California]

This is so lovely and beautiful...
it melts my heart just thinking about
feeling that way about someone again...

I'm sorry he's your ex now... :(
but ... life has a funny way of
fixing itself.. love always returns
to us in some form ... if we allow it.

Beautiful poem... :)
very creative and artistically done.

[Kimberly_ eternal dream..]

its very beautiful!!!!
nice words.....


-eternal kim

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very sweet arcoustic... unconditional love is the only kind of love... wonderfully done.

[Dalaina Renee]

Sweet and very cleaver!

[These Haunted Hallways]

Aw, sweet :) Very beautiful words :) Great job with everything here :)

B.A.