Hurry Spring

One of my one minute or 60 second poem. I'm in a writing group where they give you a topic and you have this long to write about it. If you make a mistake you have to keep going. No backspaces or editing allowed. This is what I got.

 

 

 

Won't you please hurry.

I really miss you sweet spring.

Watching the little squirrels scurry.

And listening to the birds sing.

Look at all the beautiful flowers.

Sun setting over a field of clover.

I could lay here and dream for hours.

I never want this season to be over.

New life all around.

Animals come out to play.

Plants coming up from the ground.

This is a new day.

Goodbye winter and your wind of fury.

I want to great the season of green.

So please come, please hurry.

I miss you my wonderful spring.

Reviews

[Brenda Sue]

Very well written. I love this and the shades of green you have used. Beautifully penned. Great job.

[Emily B]

Hurry, hurry!

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

i love the different shades of green that you wrote this piece in - like flowers coming to life after a long harsh winter... beautiful words... fantastic job

[forfila]

Spring is my favorit time of year,,I much enjoyed your heartfelt welcoming to the greates time of year.

I think I will add it to my favs