I like you open liner. Love. And the reason is good too. But like I always tell you, just write more. (It is kinda hard to write a review when your profile picture is hilarious) Anyway, i liked it. And hey did you know they have a point system here?
Gabi,
The impetus of your poetry builds moment, ambiance, timbre, life, and breath … speaking to the emotion, tenderness, and caring side, but most of all, its poetic voice pulls one into your own moment, making us relate to your inferences as though they are our own.
This, M'Lady, takes skill, knowing, and insight to accomplish, and the most wanting aspect of your work lies in presentation and format.
One cannot be a poet without the soul and inner grasp of life and emotion, and (somehow) in your short years, you've gathered all of it, like stars to sprinkle into your ink.
Well, I could go on and on from the pictures you've painted into my mind, but let it suffice to say I adore and admire your poetry, and even more-so the fine potential glowing forth from it.
Hugs of warmest thanks to you for sharing, Gabi! ⁓ Richard
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Richard,
Thank you so much. Reviews like yours mean the absolute world to me. I have grown wi.. read moreRichard,
Thank you so much. Reviews like yours mean the absolute world to me. I have grown wiser by talking to people like you who have captured my imagination. Your comments and criticism is always respected, appreciated and observed. Thank you so much!
Wishing you the best,
Gabi
I love the way you have pointed out some philosophies of life with your own perspective and what people think of them because of their different types of fear....A very unique write.....I love your thought style....Full ratings+clappings!!!!.....God bless you....
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you very much for reading! It's much appreciated!
8 Years Ago
all u said makes one review his reason for responding to these questions How they do.
But kn.. read moreall u said makes one review his reason for responding to these questions How they do.
But know the best thing about this write up?.
it's real
Bio: Gabrielle Esposito is a senior in high school looking to find her niche in the literary world. Although she is young, she has already been published. Her work has appeared in the online literary .. more..