The Piece of Me That Is All Yours

Even six feet underground, your loved ones hold a piece of you.

A Piece of Me Deep in the Ground

The Piece of Me That is All Yours

Is still in your grasp

Late at night I wonder if in your clasped hands

You still can feel the Piece of Me that I gave you

When I sleep, I see your smile

The one thing that fills me with warmth

But I turn when I think of you lying there

Your face far from the sun

The sweet breath gone from your body

Never to pass again between the lips that I kissed

The left side of my chest

Is empty and frigid

Because you still have

The Piece of Me That is All yours

On a day when I need you

The tears come and roll off my cheeks

Though I know you took that fatal leap

Because you felt too much heat

You burned, fizzled and finally popped

But I’m alone now, thinking of

The holes in the lining of your eternal bed just like the hole inside of me

Author's Note

Please leave any comments or criticism that you feel will improve this work! I'm not the best at poetry, so please leave any of your thoughts with me and I will take them into consideration.

Reviews

[Tommy Naclerio]

It isn't about heaven or hell, but it's the love story I was looking for. See you can write it real. I don't think you were trying to go for such a sad feeling. Honestly please change your picture. And Sal told me to get tickets to see you guys? I am not sure. IM ALMOST DONE.

[Inject Positivity]

Seeing your poems i don't think you are not good at writing poetry....How connected this poem is to the human life, your message is very true, every line is flowing with something very relatable for a general human.....I truly loved it.....Full ratings!!!!!Clap! Clap!.......