Doubts

Doubts

A Poem by gabiaimee
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2016

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and i would ask,
when i had come back,
with his eyes firmly fixed on nothing,
and his voice choking on it's own words,
"what have we become?"

© 2017 gabiaimee


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Doubt. A heavy place to be. You said a handful in the short poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's often scary to know that we don't know what we've become...maybe we become magical people, or demons. We can become anything, given the right amount of time. Short, but you wrote the world a powerful message. You got my thoughts churning!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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