Yes

Yes

A Poem by gabiaimee
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Yes, I know.

"
Yes, I'm scared that it might hurt,
and yes, I know I loved you first.
But what's the climb without the fall?
I'd rather die than not love you at all.

Yes, we have a lot to learn,
but, my god, you make my body burn.
I want you now, I wanted you then,
tomorrow I'll want you all over again.

Yes, I'll let desire win
in the ways you love and touch my skin.
Let's have our fun, we've got the time,
because, baby, I've made up my mind.

© 2015 gabiaimee


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"I want you now, I wanted you then,
tomorrow I'll want you all over again."
Those are my favorite lines in the write :) They express a certain kind of confidence that your love will never fade away and that there is still a love that is building stronger by the day. Awesome write :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Your in love but just don't give your heart away to just any one make sure he is the one.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow this poem was so powerful I love it. I love that the person is admitting his pain but knows that without this person in their lives it just wouldn't be worth living. I love the vulnerable state that this person is as they admit their emotions.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I truly believe a woman decide if she want love. A man is just lucky to be offered love.
"Yes, I'll let desire win
in the ways you love and touch my skin.
Let's have our fun, we've got the time,
because, baby, I've made up my mind. "
I liked the above lines a lot. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved the rhyming :)) Awesome :))!!!!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"I want you now, I wanted you then,
tomorrow I'll want you all over again."
Those are my favorite lines in the write :) They express a certain kind of confidence that your love will never fade away and that there is still a love that is building stronger by the day. Awesome write :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What's the climb without the fall...such a good read. I rather enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: love, romance, yes, romantic, crush, young, relationship, fear, sex, desire, lust, erotic, teen, boyfriend, girlfriend, husband, wife, couple, touch, burn, risk, chances

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