It Was You

It always was you

I know I've not been alive forever, but I've been waiting longer than eternity to find the compliment to my own completeness. I didn't know what to look for or where to search, so I patiently anticipated the reveal of the meaningful mystery.

It was you. All this time, in all this eternity, I was waiting for you. All the nights I lay sleeplessly feeling whole but not entire, it was your empty space napping on the cold underside of my pillow. Before I knew your name or how your wholeness would fit perfectly into mine, it was you I was looking for. It has always been you.

Reviews

[WillGrant]

"I know I've not been alive forever, but I've been waiting longer than eternity to find the compliment to my own completeness". I love this. Suggests we are always searching for our other half even if in a different life time. Also suggest it takes that long to find them. Loved reading this.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. We do need another to make us complete.
"Before I knew your name or how your wholeness would fit perfectly into mine, it was you I was looking for. It has always been you. "
I liked the above line. We are lucky when we know we had found our joy and happiness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Brittany Bostic]

I understands finally finding what you feel you have been looking for. That answer to all of the questions you didn't even know you we're answering...

[Robert]

A very lovely thought out poem, well done.

[AaronFreitas]

Must be a very special person... to find the right person, the person that compliments who we are is something special. Nice work :)

[Melinda McQueen]

What a sweet write.
Thank you for sharing.

[Bohrium Guy]

I feel the passion and the stirring in this write. I think you done a fine job at displaying your thoughts to words as well as the overall presentation. I found your write to be excellent. Great job and hats off to you!

~Rob~

[hanir]

I love the flow of emotions. I feel you. I feel the same actually
Nicely written.