Plummet

Plummet

A Poem by gabiaimee
"

We don't just fall.

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There's a thing you should know about writers:
When we fall in love, we don't just fall,
we plummet.
We tumble longer than Alice down the rabbit hole,
and without the March Hare to follow.
Our hearts continually skip like stones on a lake,
then sink heavily into deep water emotions.
While we are descending,
the butterflies in our stomachs flutter out of our mouths,
as they don't fall like we do.
They pour up in words we cannot communicate
without the facade of a pen or type.
We do not know how to stop the plunge,
or whether we will land into the arms of a savior
or under the pressure of an endless ocean floor.
All we know is that we will ultimately crash
without a warning, where, or when.

© 2015 gabiaimee


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Your words are true.
"There's a thing you should know about writers:
When we fall in love, we don't just fall,
we plummet. "
Best ancient saying. "when a writer falls in love with you. You will become immortal. I enjoyed the words and thoughts in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I was moved by this piece of writing. It was beautiful and honest. And it is so true about writers. We fall harder than most. So many props for this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So true. Great job. :) I love it. 100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed this so much. Sadly I fall out of love just as fast...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Artist do feel especially deeply!! to sink so deep as to look up to hell...nice poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful. I feel the same way. Falling in love with a character is like plummeting down into the pit of space never sure where or when or if we will be able to stop.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, so true are your words. Very nicely done here Gabiaimee.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your words are true.
"There's a thing you should know about writers:
When we fall in love, we don't just fall,
we plummet. "
Best ancient saying. "when a writer falls in love with you. You will become immortal. I enjoyed the words and thoughts in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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