Galaxies

Galaxies

A Poem by gabiaimee
"

You are made of Heaven and Earth

"
In those still rare moments
with the chance to study your face
so intimately close to mine,
I happen across the Earth and heavens
etched into your lines.
Gently cradling your hand in mine,
I trace my fingers along the roadmap
of veins that run the length of your wrist.
Those red rivers that carry your life
from the source into deltas and streams.
Up your arms, down your body
is your protection, the surface of your planet
spotted with fathomless craters and blazing stars.
Between the mountains on your back,
the tree trunk that supports your frame
branches into the limbs and digits that caress.
I am lost in the galaxies that my mouth leaves for you:
the Milky Way on your side almost outshines
the Andromeda on your shoulder. 
The complexity of the solar systems
shines through the purple moons under your eyes.
Your irises show me every sky in your worlds. 
from misty to radiant to stormy grey;
they are cosmically breathtaking
above laughter lines stretching like canyons.

© 2015 gabiaimee


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Wow girlie! "The complexity of the solar systems / shines through the purple moons under your eyes." What an amazing image/metaphor! You fluidly weave together so many earthly and space-centered images. The poem gains momentum and steals an impressed gasp from the reader.

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Super cool imagery! I really liked all the spatial references!

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What a fantastic way to describe the body, very creative!
imagery is. Great! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

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Tags: romance, romantic, love, earth, heaven, space, outer, galaxies, galaxy, milky way, andromeda, hands, fingers, body, planet, planets, solar, system, map, road, mountain, mountains, tree, trunk, moon

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