Chapter 1 The Prolonged Visit

Chapter one roll out. Lemme know if i should add anything.

Skye woke up to find her window open and the moon shining through it. She sat up slowly and yawned as she stretched in bed. She untangled herself from the covers and stood up. She went to her window and found herself smiling as she looked out at the forest. She could hear the owls and coyotes and crickets making their little noises. The stars were out and the moon was shining brightly. It was a perfect night with a perfect moon. "I'm going to tell him tonight." She thought to herself. "I'm going to tell him I love him." She walked over to her mirror and saw her eyes sparkling that lime green she loved. They always sparkled when she was excited. She looked at her reflection for a while. She was very thin blooded so she always looked pale; she had wide childlike eyes and had a very petite body. She was thin but proportioned perfectly as if an angel had blessed her with such beauty. Just then there was a tiny rap at her window and she jumped, a bit startled. Her heart raced as she went to her window and sat on the edge looking for him. "Oliver?" she questioned. He then appeared in front of her grinning as she yelped in surprise. "Don't do that! You know it scares me!" She couldn't help but grin though, his presence made her so happy. He chuckled softly and she lunged at him with a hug. He wrapped his arms around her and hugged her tight, his heart thudding as well. Oliver was a young and shy boy. He was 17, so not actually boy age, but his features still hinted the childish touch. he had bright blue eyes and brown hair along with a adorable grin that melted girl's hearts. Skye was a bit younger, only 16, but she was in love with him just the way he was in love with her. "I missed you so much!" she blurted, blushing as always. He grinned and nodded his head, "And I have missed you as well Skye" She smiled and started to ask a bunch of questions, "How are you? How have you been? What have you been up to? How is Noah? How is Freya?" Suddenly his eyes clouded over with sadness and she stopped. "What's wrong?" She asked, her eyes searching his expression. He looked to the side and spoke softly, "It's Freya.." his voice trailed off as he tried to gain control of his emotions. Skye put her hand to her mouth in shock as her eyes widened in fear, "What happened to her?!" He cleared his throat and looked at her, "She went hunting... but didn't return.." His eyes began to tear up, "We went looking for her but when we got there... it was too late.."  Oliver struggled to keep his voicce leveled as he continued, "She was full of arrows.. just like a porcupine.." He laughed harshly as he glared at the floor. Skye continued to look at him, her eyes overflowing with tears. "It was Artemis. Her arrows. I can only imagine how much pain the poison made her feel.." He growled as he spat out the next words, " This war needs to end! Cratos MUST know what this is doing to people!" Skye cringed as his voice raised. He looked at her apologetically, "I'm sorry.. I can't even how much pain you're in.." Skye said quietly. Oliver sniffed the air suddenly and his eyes began to glow. "I need to go.." his teeth began to glow faintly as his fangs began to grow. He kissed her forhead as she nodded her head. He lept out the window, and was gone.

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[Harmony Babin]

Really great outline (: