What we all need

Just a little look at life.

What we all need

     By 

Gabrielle Coe

What we all need is a little more strength.

A little more will,

and a longer life's length.

What we all need is a little more discipline,

so we can let go of all feelings we hide within.

A little more love,

and a little more care.

Not just a hug from your old teddy bear.

A little more thankfullness 

for what we do have.

And a little more forgiveness,

for the people who've done bad.

A little more giving,

to those who have little.

So we all rest in peace.

Equal, and in the middle.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think of it! <3 I wrote this during Social class in school lol

Reviews

[Praveeta]

Inspiring piece on life. Nicely penned.

[Kaotic Barbie]

Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

[Jimmy]

This is a great piece..... you need to post more poems.