Daddy issues

DADDY ISSUES

i talk the indifference 

i resemble the indifference 

i act the indifference 

i walk the indifference 

i am the indifference 

i f*****g reek of the indifference 

a figure i adore doesn't give me the time of day or an open door

a mother that makes me want to stop, drop and hit the floor!!!!!!! 

(unfinished and also just casual rant, enjoy :) love everyone) 

Reviews

[Dark_Duckling]

Oh my my, I declare this rant to be 100 % relatable

[Phill Oz O'fee]

The torment of obliviousness poetically encapsulated - great rant - how long to wait for the final draft? :-)

[CLR9]

yesterday, a man crawled out of a toilet

he said the same thing, then he ate my chocolate bar

I will never get it back

grate pome!

[YanZeros]

I can hear Eminem rapping this verse! Hope to read more of this well written gabbyhopeharo :)