Control

Control

A Poem by gabbyhopeharo

I've lost control
I am not query to sanity
What am I supposed to feel
What is even real
Life is a spinning uncontrollable wheel
I've lost the will
Am I a person or an unsigned bill
Life gives no exceptions
Yet that's what I want
Answers to my conception
A way out of this deception
I'm in a drought
Absence of reason
Life, give me clout

© 2015 gabbyhopeharo


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gabbyhopeharo
ignore grammar/spelling problems

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"Am I a person or an unsigned bill..."
Liked the line. Very deep thoughts you bled in. Seemed, your metaphor is nailed real hard over the night, but when it comes to pay love, everything seemed to be unsigned. Quite fascinating. Would be looking forward to reading "you"!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like the sense that she may be all over the place and out of control but that she seeks stability and solidarity

Posted 8 Years Ago


"Am I a person or an unsigned bill..."
Liked the line. Very deep thoughts you bled in. Seemed, your metaphor is nailed real hard over the night, but when it comes to pay love, everything seemed to be unsigned. Quite fascinating. Would be looking forward to reading "you"!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 19, 2015
Last Updated on November 19, 2015
Tags: control, lost, life, feelings, people

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gabbyhopeharo
gabbyhopeharo

Davis, CA



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A Poem by gabbyhopeharo