That Creepy Feeling
A Book by Gabby Gellerman
Well this is taking creepy to a whole new level
© 2014 Gabby Gellerman
Author's Note
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This was the first story I ever wrote I'm sorry it sucks but I used to only draw
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Reviews
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Well, that was scary to read. I will say though, the tone and the feel of it are spot on. I would suggest working on the flow, showing her escalating her behavior rather than just telling the reader what is happening. Not bad for a first story ever though!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
This was the first story I ever wrote
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Added on June 26, 2014
Last Updated on July 1, 2014
Tags: Love, creepy
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