i really liked this one it may not have been the best time but sometimes true talent shines through during rough patches ill look forward to seeing more of your work
great write!!
Oh wow,, this is very deep. Im sorry to hear about their deaths. Writting is a great way to let your emottions out though, and you siplayed that wonderfully, this is a really great poem, i would love to see more of your work.
-keep up the excellent work &&
-Thanx for sharing!
hmmm ok so i'm 17 and ya i like to write short stories about random stuff. Right now it's more random than anything. A few years ago my writing was all based on war, now i write what ever comes to min.. more..