Thank You for Love

Just some random thoughts, that moved my soul

Jump off a bridge

get rid of this world

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Walk off a cliff

rid me of this life

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Nothing I do is right

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I'm going to die someday

make someday be now

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I don't deserve life

never have, never will

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Through tears is love

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One thing keeps me here

your love is alive

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Only thing that is true

it lives everywhere

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_Anywhere

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Your love will live in me

And never die.

Author's Note

change life with death and die with live.

Gods love is the only thing that keeps me alive, without his love and mercy, I would be dead.

I have random burst of feelings flow out like rain, wheather it be positive or negative. My feelings flow so i write them down, change the words and this poem changes, just like my emotions, always changing

Reviews

[darkgurl]

This is written ever so well, filled with raw energy and emotion.

[Jonathan Bodnar]

"Jump off a bridge

get rid of this world"

That is my favorite little piece of this.
It starts the whole poem out with a loving pain for our surroundings.

I often do the same and put all my thoughts into a single equilibrium of writing.
Well done.