Tired

Tired

A Poem by Keiko

I'm tired of this life.

I'm tired of everything going wrong.

I'm tired of not being who you expect me to be.

I'm tried of being alone,

tried of being forgotten,

tried og living a lie.

I'm tired of this

EVERYTHING

So I'll finish it.

 

Life is a trap, you make by yourself

for yourself

© 2008 Keiko


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Life is a trap only if you make it one, the act of traping is holding something or someone down, and if that someone happens to be yourself, then all you need to do is free youreslf. And that in itself is something that not to many people can do, not that its hard, its just slightly complicated, and in fact needs time, the one thing we all lack the most, the one thing no one really has to offer. But freeing yourself in a sense is just being more care-free, and not in the whole, I dont give a f- way either, but in a- Im give it up to Him, and let him deal with it, and just go along with what needs to happen...yeah sorry, just kinda..ranting.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Yes! So very true here, I like your style of writing, you have a wonderful talent.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Life is what you make of it.You play the cards you are dealt as best you can. Just giving up is not the answer We all get dispirited and downbeat sometims Once yu reach the bottom the only way is so move it

Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Life is a trap only if you make it one, the act of traping is holding something or someone down, and if that someone happens to be yourself, then all you need to do is free youreslf. And that in itself is something that not to many people can do, not that its hard, its just slightly complicated, and in fact needs time, the one thing we all lack the most, the one thing no one really has to offer. But freeing yourself in a sense is just being more care-free, and not in the whole, I dont give a f- way either, but in a- Im give it up to Him, and let him deal with it, and just go along with what needs to happen...yeah sorry, just kinda..ranting.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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