Mystery

Mystery

A Poem by Keiko

Love is the wind

Graceful and calm.

 

Love is a battlefield

When everything's wrong.

 

Love is a mystery

© 2008 Keiko


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Very simple and very well written. You have a unique talent Like this write as well.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like how simple all your poems are, yet how much they actually speak.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very simple and graceful, but it doesn't flow as well as i'd like to see it. Wonderful write though! :)

-Lauren Burch

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 25, 2008
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