Moon Cookie

Moon Cookie

A Poem by Keiko

The moon in the sky
Sparkles on the lake.
It gives light to the dark
When the sun has gone away

This cookie in my hand
Sparkles in my eye
It gives light to my soul
When life has flown by.

The moon in the sky
Like the cookie in my hand,
They both bring joy to my life
Even if there's no one to understand.

© 2008 Keiko


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Very well put and written, Wonderful write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This also brought joy to my life. I LOVE COOKIES!!! :)

the only thing that really bothers me though is that the first stanza doesn't rhyme when the second and third do.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is so cool! I loved it!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 23, 2008
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