Judgment Day

Judgment Day

A Poem by poeticsafari
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Often times we are shrouded by the cold hand of death lingering over us but its when you choose to defy him that bring query

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letting go always comes with unpredictable circumstances that may lead to the best or worst thing of your entire life. No matter what it may be it is always the hardest thing to do whether it be getting your self into the best thing ever possible or getting rid of something dark that hung onto you for years, its still hard to say goodbye. With every outcome and every path that had lead up to this very moment it became very clear that the best possible thing to do is to let go. Though all of these things will remain with us forever, somewhere in a dark obscure place somewhere deep inside your brain. Knowing that you have finally picked the right thing to let go of is the best choice that any individual could make.
 
Storms are passing quietly overhead
As the tunnel once closed off to the
world rears its head revealing a
channel of light. Its when you find
your own tunnel is when you can begin
to start a new, broaden your horizon,
wipe the rain off your glasses and
finally begin to see life as it was always meant
to be seen. No doubts, no inconceivable notions
, and the know how that there is no longer
a grim reaper hanging silently over
waiting to finally claim his prize. So like in all
fairy tales the thoughts that you don't anticipate
are the ones that truly matter and will get you through the day.
life is something to behold so never take
yours for granite, or you could be the one
making the same exact mistakes
behind someone else's one way mirror

© 2013 poeticsafari


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Its when you find
your own tunnel is when you can begin
to start a new, broaden your horizon,
wipe the rain off your glasses and
finally begin to see life as it was always meant
to be seen.
I love this section of your poem...its like an awakening. Beautiful write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poeticsafari

11 Years Ago

I greatly appreciate your kind words about my writing, it is people such as your self is the main re.. read more
J. Kell

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the gift :) I look forward to more.



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Its when you find
your own tunnel is when you can begin
to start a new, broaden your horizon,
wipe the rain off your glasses and
finally begin to see life as it was always meant
to be seen.
I love this section of your poem...its like an awakening. Beautiful write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poeticsafari

11 Years Ago

I greatly appreciate your kind words about my writing, it is people such as your self is the main re.. read more
J. Kell

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the gift :) I look forward to more.

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Added on August 28, 2013
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poeticsafari
poeticsafari

nokomis, FL



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i am an amateur poetry writer/story writer trying to spread poetry to the world hoping to inspire others more..

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