Dream

Dream

A Poem by fureya

© 2008 fureya


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simple but effective however You first line threw me
She didnt touch him neither did he
doesnt feel right should perhaps read she didnt touch him, nor he her?
He could not avoid touching himself

Posted 17 Years Ago

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fureya
fureya

London, United Kingdom



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A poet who was born and raised in the sunny lands of Mediterranean, now anchored in North, still playing with the words to express her feelings and thoughts. more..

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