Midnight Musings, Pt. 2

Midnight Musings, Pt. 2

A Poem by Audrey Peters
"

Don't try to write at night.

"

My careless ink mark spoils

the ivory-colored pillowcase,

like a livid new scar

or an uprooted flowers.

Except that doesn't sound right.

It's far too prosaic, far too,

because I liked that pillowcase,

simple as it was, old, even,

pilled and wearing thin.

I suppose one shouldn't

write in bed.  It's like smoking there,

or midnight sentry duty--

lose vigilance and it burns

down to ashes.  You start to use

words like whither and sere

and whilst--horrid words--

and even to use words like horrid,

and the form:  the continued

state of simple nonbeing

can't be called dying, after all.

© 2008 Audrey Peters


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Audrey Peters
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Audrey Peters
Audrey Peters

Kingsport, TN



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