Unheard Voices

Scream with others! Let the noise overwhelm what you have to say!

"'Twas too loud to hear

Noise too loud, voice too silent

But the words were clear."

Reviews

[Armanis]

This is actually a beautiful haiku. I like it. However, and this is more for my critical thinking than it is for the flow of your poem.
Third line, "The"
It would be interesting to make a following haiku about what these words are. You are telling us something that is there, but not telling us what it is, so a follow haiku would be wise.
Also, 'The' What is the purpose of "The words" could you use something like, "Your words" 'thy words' its words' or even, 'their words?'
It still flows with the poem well, but gives the words more of an identity.

[Lox]

You can add another haiku? Sorry I didn't know! Haha. I thought haikus were limited to 17 syllable but I didn't know you could follow up another one! Haha I guess I didn't specify what "The words" meant. Kinda gives off a mysterious scent don't you think? Thank you for your criticism! I really appreciate it. :)

[Lox]

When I was writing this, I thought, "the fireworks are too loud I wanna say, "Happy New Year" to everybody but they can't hear me although they already know what I was saying."

[Armanis]

It is but it isn't. You don't have to be enslaved to the form of the porm

[PhoenixDown]

I imagine words so clearly etched that noise doesn't matter - the moment in discussion being beyond sound, even when life is shouting its loudest.

[Lox]

I am moved by your words Mr. PhoenixDown, sorry I haven't gotten to review most works I've been busy are we all not? Anyways, thank you for your kind review, I hope to return the favor!

[Junction]

Excellent write. Whispering can be intense enough to drown out the noise. Happy New Year!!!!!!!

[Lox]

Interesting perception! I am glad to your review, looking forward to you.