A heart's revolt

Can't let it out? Need to clarify but silently caged.

"I want to reveal

The feelings dwelling in me

So all may be clear."

Reviews

[Intothemilkyway]

I feel this so much. Im a person who doesn't show too much feelings. I keep it all inside. The most you will see me is being happy or angry but that's it.

[Jesse W.]

It's a very well done haiku, I can appreciate exactly how well this poem depicts the heart's desire for liberation. Especially in such a short haiku. Also, as a complete aside, the lyrics to Let It Go from Frozen sprang up to mind: 'conceal, don't feel.' This haiku is basically the antithesis of that line. It makes me appreciate it all the more.

[Junction]

Exactly. Starting at the beginning and let it go from there. It will lead you toward a path
that you may or may not recognize. But, you are on your journey! Good Poem!!!!!

[Lox]

Thank you Junction!!! Although I have a few works I am thankful you have the time to see and review one of my works! I look forward to that in my coming works, as I will return the favor. May I add you as a friend?

[Junction]

yes, please do.

[FreedomFighter]

I can totally relate to this, my feelings are never clear to people but I think they are, great work

[Lox]

I am thankful for the review Mr. ARareBreed! I look forward to your inspiring reviews and I hope to return the favor!

[FreedomFighter]

:) u got it!!!!!!!

[PhoenixDown]

Merry Christmas, Lox. You are well on your way to nearing yourself, as well. I can feel it.

[Lox]

Thank you. :) It warms my heart to see someone encouraging me at times when I'm lacking inspiration and ideas to create more work like seriously I've been thinking of making another piece but I can't quite put my finger one it.

[PhoenixDown]

What kind of piece? Lack of inspiration is so detrimental. It is nice to see that others share that realization. Most people dont understand! Haha.

[Lox]

Haha, no its not the piece its me. Umm you see, as funny as it sounds I use inspiration to make ideas to base my work on. And lately the inspirations not coming since Christmas has passed. I want to create and publish pieces but I dislike creating works without thought. So I'm hoping on making ones this coming New Year celebration. What do you think?

[PhoenixDown]

I think that good pieces come from inspiration that is natural and spontaneous. I don't think it is something we can control necessarily. But I do think that we can influence and alter our environments and mindsets. My advice? Sit back and just be on the look out. If you have true desire to write something beautiful, then the inspiration or muse will find you.

[Lox]

I see, thank you for your kind words of advice my good friend! No wonder you crate all those wonderful pieces of yours. I will heed the advice of my good friend Phoenixdown who not only a fellow writer but a pro at it as well. Thank you!!!