Writing

Your Pencils flieng across the paper,

Nothing can stop it,

You feel real freedom,

So do what you please.

Its okay to be differn't, to not fit in,

your pencil and paper doesnt mind,

voice your opinion,

Dare to be differnt!

Yell your words from the top of a moutain!

They're yours not anybody elses.

I doesn't matter how long it is,

how important, or trivel,

So let your imagination flow free.

 

 

Reviews

[Kiya]

Line 1: "Flieng" should be "flying"
Line 5: "Differen't" should be "different"
Line 6: "doesnt" should be "doesn't"
Line 9: "moutain" should be "mountain"
Line 12: "trivel" should be "trivial"

:)

[Kiya]

Difference is definitely a good thing :) A nice poem that "yells from the top of a mountain!" Just a few spelling mistakes here and there, so I'll add notes and correct them. Nice concept though, so keep those thoughts coming!

Kiya :)