Lust Me, Love Me.

Lust Me, Love Me.

A Poem by Lillian
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A free-verse on my reality.

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Lust me. 
Just take me now. 
Make it hot and steamy.
Make it fast and furious. 
Be dangerous and wild.
Make me scream for more.
Don't ever stop. 
Love me. 
Wait for the moment. 
Let it be warm and kind.
Let it be slow and meaningful. 
Play it safe.
Whisper sweet nothings into my ear.
Don't ever stop.

Lust me. Love me. Just don't ever stop.

© 2008 Lillian


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Wow!
You go girl.
You've expressed it perfectly. "Love me. Lust me."
There's such sensual play in your words.
An intricate dance. Deadly. Luscious. Scrumptious.
You my dear Lillian could seduce me at a thousand paces.
God I love ya girl!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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this is really hot and warm.... ;) hope you got the pun intended...

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

Posted 15 Years Ago


hehe oooh, loved this piece. made me think about the month i have ahead of me, loving and lusting the woman who has my heart :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


Sex is a wonderful thing, isn't it! Nice write!

T'SaS

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very nicely done...good rhythm and flow! Sexy little piece of writing in a very sensual way...Great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow!
You go girl.
You've expressed it perfectly. "Love me. Lust me."
There's such sensual play in your words.
An intricate dance. Deadly. Luscious. Scrumptious.
You my dear Lillian could seduce me at a thousand paces.
God I love ya girl!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

About a previous review: *I* know the difference between lust and love, and I certainly know when one is appropriate at a given time.

Great poem. Very, erm...not so innocent, heh.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This poem reads fast and furious like love when it is young and good... trying to keep it like that is the key... you do a great job expressing passion here.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Awesome write! its amazing how fast and how much love and/or lust can take over one's body :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey Lillian.

A really nice touch with the words. Wonderful use of clich�.

The voice in the poem if playful and also non-judgmental. There is, or seems to be, a duality in the express of desire(call it love/lust) but duality only exists at first blush; separation is not absolute. Opposites slip into each other through many clines and colors.

You capture that well here.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Don't we all wish for a man that knows the difference and knows when to do which?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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