Help!

A last plea for help...

Help

I'm falling

Slowly, into nothing

A lost, troubled existence

Desperate, hoping someone still cares

Reaching, but I fall

The light dims

Losing myself...

Help...

Author's Note

If this seems like a rather elementary school style of poem, forgive me. I just needed something to get me back into a writing mood...

Reviews

[Tanisha Davis]

Wow. Si short yet so powerful and raw. If you are interested, please read my allegory called "The Hill of Pathways". I love how real this is

[THERISA]

The deepest message can be conveyed in the simplest of forms, which you do beautifully with this poem. There is an elegance, that can only be found in simplicity. You have framed it, perfectly. Thank you, for sharing this poem with us. Hope it has jumpstart your poetic motor.

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

Forgiven..you know there is merit it simplicity..and expression in poetry is not a contest we hold for ourselves.. one small poem to spawn more and not a bad small poem at all.

[Lightfalls]

Oh this is a nice poem. It's interesting and fun to read, even though the message is sad. :(

[Mioki]

I like the simplicity of this poem; it doesn't really need deep details to get the message across. It is simply a call for help. The way you formatted this was nice, I think it goes well with the poem. Good write, I enjoyed reading it.

[Sseoni]

What a great poem! I really liked it! :D

[lost inside]

I like it i think you made a wonderful point
well said.