IF IT WASN T FOR YOU

Is it love?

 

 

 

Breaking doors of loneliness

Crushing walls of sadness

Crossing roads of bitterness

Until I reach to imagine your face s sweetness

With no snide remarks

Nor with false friends in front,,

with your thought at head

i rest

 settled and calm

 

The inner strengths begins to come

As I find  missing Me , the one 

who might have been lost 

                                    If you hadn t been once around 

Author's Note

Yeah ...the inside thinking, without it its hard to carry on

Reviews

[Emily Rae]

what a sad but gorgeous write. I especially love the line, "Till I reach to imagine your face s sweetness." It's amazing how one small person can turn all those things around sometimes. it sounds like you're yearning, may be love dear...

[?]

Sometimes it takes just that one person to break down those doorss of lonliness...crush the walls of sadness...turn the bitterness into sweetness..this was good thinking Highthought.
I dont know if its love or not, only you can know that.
Nicely written...like your thinking