TASTE AND HEART

OHHH HEART

You see this , you see that
You like this , then you like that.

Days pass , tastes change
What's in heart,stays for always

Author's Note

what do u think?

Reviews

[Girl With A Pen]

This was an interesting piece. It's short, sweet and to the point. What you describe is human emotions and mind change, but what we feel in our hearts are the one thing we can never change.

"Days pass, Tastes change"
My favorite part, I think. :) This poem is very well written. Poetic, honest, emotional....you have out done yourself. Thank you for sharing

[Layla J Omorose]

short, sweet, and too the point. well done

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

nice job

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Sweet, short, but thoughtfully written

[highthought]

i did manage it a bit

[Ravyne Hawke]

Well-crafted.. short but it says so much in such a small amount of words. Awesome job!

[Aurora Lynn]

The heart can definately be a fickle thing, and this poem expresses it clearly. Well done!
~Aurora

[Lily Mae]

It always stays in the heart.. Sometimes a good thing sometimes a place to hide the pain of a love that didn't work out so well.. Nicely written :) xx

[Angela]

I think this has a lot of potential. Speaks of a fickle mind. My only suggestions... you might try

You see this, then you see that
You like this, then you like that

Days pass, tastes change
What's in the heart should stay always
This just helps make it more grammatically correct and adds continuity. Almost there!