TASTE AND HEART

OHHH HEART

You see this , you see that
You like this , then you like that.

Days pass , tastes change
What's in heart,stays for always

Author's Note

what do u think?

Reviews

[Girl With A Pen]

This was an interesting piece. It's short, sweet and to the point. What you describe is human emotions and mind change, but what we feel in our hearts are the one thing we can never change.

"Days pass, Tastes change"
My favorite part, I think. :) This poem is very well written. Poetic, honest, emotional....you have out done yourself. Thank you for sharing

[Emily Rae]

this is short, yet deep. nice read

[michelle koizumi]

Yes what is in the heart does stay forever.

[Roxi L]

Whats in the heart never fades, no matter how everything around you may change. That same state of heart is always there. Great poem and in so few words as well.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

[a_mystery]

Great display of feelings in small no of words!
With time passing on, we witness many things in the story of life. Its so true that whatever is printed on the heart never fades away. As you say,

"What's in heart,stays for always"

[Gypsie]

How true, you have such a way of explaining what is real. Beings are fickle and are quick to change what they want; but the heart will stay true when it is real. Thank you for the request to read. Simple and poetic

[:)]

Wow there's lots of meaning in such a short number of words..
One correction though on the second line you need to put a space between like and that...:) bam !

[highthought]

red,, thank you for ur review however , using the same instead of "for always "will make the poem loses its rhythm,if you like i ll take "for" off .what do u think ?
guys you can share too

[Red]

I like it, although I migh loose "for" in the last sentence, or change it to stays the same. Might give it a better flow

[EMW]

Very short but very well written. I do enjoy the poems you send me and again I must apologize that it takes me so long to get to them. Working and writing five books keeps me pretty busy. Don't let that make you hesitate to send me anymore requests. I promise I'll get to each one you send and if you send me a message to reply as soon as I can. You are very talented.

[?]

Hey this is short but powerful and full of meaning.
People, things, everything and everyone changes. Our hearts, whats inside what we have allowed in will always be.
Wonderful thought provoking poem