This was an interesting piece. It's short, sweet and to the point. What you describe is human emotions and mind change, but what we feel in our hearts are the one thing we can never change.
"Days pass, Tastes change"
My favorite part, I think. :) This poem is very well written. Poetic, honest, emotional....you have out done yourself. Thank you for sharing
If this is correct and a heart always stays true....then we should all have love and goodness in us somewhere, right? Do you believe we are all pure at heart at birth? Does that stay even after we grow....even when some turn dark? Then there is hope yet! Hope for brighter, loving, beautiful futures. For less war and more peace....for solutions :)
i like this...we are forever changing and growing but what our heart feels remains true!!!!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
And one of the thing that u love is ur love to Scotland ,I think the childhood period is the one tha.. read moreAnd one of the thing that u love is ur love to Scotland ,I think the childhood period is the one that stays the most
This was an interesting piece. It's short, sweet and to the point. What you describe is human emotions and mind change, but what we feel in our hearts are the one thing we can never change.
"Days pass, Tastes change"
My favorite part, I think. :) This poem is very well written. Poetic, honest, emotional....you have out done yourself. Thank you for sharing
This is a clever analogy. As we grow..our sense of perception, including how we taste things....see things.... it does and will change as we become older...wiser...sometimes for the better...sometimes not. But the heart forever burdens our secrets, desires, hopes, fears. Yes...the heart carries a heavy burden.
This is profound.
And i think its true..taste changes frequently.. But what we have in our heart, goes a long way..longer than we realize.
A well written piece :)
Ok i am a male , English is my second language, so it's hard for me to give a fair review sometimes, so dont expect a lot..
i am a sales manager and, had this attraction to writing more..