WAVES & SEA (PART 2)

WAVES & SEA (PART 2)

A Poem by highthought
"

join them in thier trip of love

"

His troubles in life...

get destroyed at the shore of her eyes...

waves were replaced by his tears

proving that his love is deep as sea.

 

He swam in his secret joy,

as he sees her more and more ...

 

 

Responding to his storm of love,

her wings moved up and down

flying all over his sea,

enjoying love, care and peace.

 

He was poor but a cousin,

constantly, he pleaded to her father

requesting his daughters hand

so dreams will be joined with facts.

 

The father with greed in his heart!

gave his poor nephew a lie after a lie

but, making him believe that she will be his pride.

 

With her image in mind,

he went in a fruitful ride;

he worked days and nights,

assuming that his net is strongly tight..

© 2011 highthought


Author's Note

highthought
Yea three more parts to come

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Part two is so beautiful and romantic. I have enjoyed reading this. Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I would rather be poor and in love then swimming in the money trying to achieve love.. Your words and thoughts are beautiful..xx

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on April 26, 2011
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Ok i am a male , English is my second language, so it's hard for me to give a fair review sometimes, so dont expect a lot.. i am a sales manager and, had this attraction to writing more..

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