ONION & PARFUM

Do you bare the smell of the onion??

When onion is his smell,
but, for you it's a perfume,
At then, you can tell......
"I am in love with that man "

Author's Note

ask yourself...

Reviews

[angelinajuk]

Yeah I like this poem. It's short and to the point and so very true.

[Snehal Ahire]

:) true

[Gypsie]

LOL! Onion the new phermone. Short, sweet and to the point, I like it.

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Hi!
I thought your poem "Onion and Perfume" was incredibly unique. A terrific theme. one I'd never thought about, BUT very applicable to someone we may love.
I have read a few of your writings. Short, yet very full of meaningful content. Very provocative.

[?]

No matter what the smell it is sweet perfume when you are in love.
Nice

[highthought]

no jill not the flaws

[Jill Wallflower]

Thats short, but true. If you love someone, you love everything about them, even the flaws