EYES & HEARTS

The competition is going on between eyes and hearts

So whenever you let your eyes lead your heart, tired you will be

because of scenes that you will see....

Scenes.. that you are not capable of..
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Scenes.. you will not remain patient for the loss of its sum

Author's Note

Watch it.....

Reviews

[Joiedevivre]

your eyes lead your heart to my eyes that will lead you to the poems of my heart. I hope they will not tire you.

[highthought]

Of course they will tire me with their joyfull pain

[Peony]

Methodical and cryptic, my kind of writing. Still though, chances one must take, if they are to gain the wisdom to comprehend such verses. Beautifully done.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This is beautiful and filled with wisdom ..
I like it very much, good writing!

Chloe

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Your very demonstrative stroke of your pen, sends volumes of important msgs.

[Sunni Davis]

Very deep and intense, something I've felt and thought numerous times. Well done!

[BeatricePortinari.]

I really enjoyed this, it felt natural and honest. Seems as though it came from somewhere pretty deep, so congrats on getting it out.

[?]

So much spoken here. Deep
What you see with your eyes is not alwyas real, but what you feel with the heart is usually real, Heart-Love-Honesty

[No use.]

this could be sweet, yet somewhere between the eyes and heart, love has lost its charm and abundance ~ a beautiful warning of the don'ts of life haha

[Lily Mae]

This is a deep intense piece, saying so much in a few words. Always be lead by heart... our sight can be clouded...the heart always knows the truth...x Beautifully written..x

[Daniel Atkinson]

Beautiful. Love shouldn't be something that's based on lust, it should be something that's honest. That's what I got from it.