HOUSE OF SADNESS

A NEST AND HOUSE

She was asked to smile,

Instead, she replied,

"It is easy to find a bird in a nest,
but, hard to get a smile from the house of sadness."

Author's Note

it still something

Reviews

[dunnia]

very nice and true

[Mockingbird]

shows despair and hurt. it really is hard to smile when your heart is broken. great job.

[Emily Rae]

like the analogy

[guiltyascharged]

Short but sweet, tells a story and it's meaning. Nice.

[Sabrina Demartini]

it truly is hard to get a smile out of a house of sadness. even a house of fear, hate, or a house of anger. i like this

[Henry Clemmons]

Well I hope that smile can make it out of saddness' house. You captured the emotion and frustration well. I don't like to be sad, but when I am I hate it when someone asks me to smile; easier said than done sometimes. Good read.

[Tahna]

really unique...I like how simple it is but how true it is too.

[Stef Outsiders]

Interesting but is full of meaning... good!!

[Peony]

I can certainly relate. Simple format and elegant wording, very nice, indeed.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I love this - i have been asked to smile but it is as you write-
""It is easy to find a bird in a nest,
but, hard to get a smile from the house of sadness."
This is my favorite of your so far.

Chloe