THREE SHORT POEMS

Feeling

In the darkness of the night,
her white teethes told the smile



Afraid  that she will be caught!
the goodbye by her fingers, was shown



Hided my love to you as much as i can,
Till my eyes gossips what i have

Author's Note

just trying

Reviews

[Gypsie]

Hmm, three excellent places to begin. Or, three great parts of a larger whole. I have to ask, what can be done with these thoughts? Where can they lead?

I like the descriptions, a nice piece.

[CrystalClear2010]

I posted some blogs part of a story and I am now sorting out something else that I wrote a while ago I havent wrote anything New End of april 2011

[EMW]

Interesting but in a good way.

[Lily Mae]

I like them all...great writes..xxx

[?]

Nice thoughts, feelings

[Stef Outsiders]

and its good to try... its good!