beauty is not a question

souls has its request though

It’s not the beauty that you have

It’s where my soul relaxes.

Do you know secrets about souls?

If not

 Leave me with my choice

Author's Note

bear me again

Reviews

[Sunni Davis]

So beautiful and powerful yet so simple. "Its where my soul relaxes." I think we're all looking for a safe place to rest the deepest, most essential core of ourselves.

[Lily Mae]

A soul relaxes with the comfort of a twin flame:) xx Beautiful..x

[SpokenWord]

For those who do not understand it is best to briddle the tongue I totally agree with your poem.

[Aimee]

I love it.

Very deep.

[Julie Deshtor]

Out of all the ones I read of yours, this is the one I find most poetic, powerful and successful.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

supple~ lovely depths~ lines in thoughtful array~

[Sigyn]

Leave me with my choice.

It leaves a sort of ring behind, does it not? Like the last chime on triangle. I like it.

-VSL

[White Ink]

Deep and beautiful!

[?]

Very nice, thought provoking,

It’s not the beauty that u have
It’s where my soul relaxes

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I like the question, "Do you know secrets about souls?"
Nice writing, highthought.


Chloe